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Hey everyone!

I'm posting this to say that I recently requested a review/critique on my comic on the Smackjeeves forums and
I have to say I'm very grateful in how much detail and all the mistakes I made, the user of the article submitted.

   :bulletorange: You can read it here: Moonlit Dawn Review.

Currently, I'm re-reading the comic as if I've never read it before. I'm going through and
making dialogue/writing changes that were suggested in the review.
I'm changing some (minor characters) names, filling in plot holes, and editing typos.
There are some changes I presently cannot make since I am to meet a deadline on the 20th of this month.
I hope when I receive feedback from the person I'm to meet the deadline with, they will give me time to
add in some character backstory (not all of it, mind you) so you guys aren't completely in the dark.

That being said, I want to apologize for the representation of pages 95 & 96.
As I read the review article and reading the comic posing like a new reader, I realized I had made a mistake in delivering the plot device.
I started in this comic in 2009 and by the time I reached these pages, I had forgotten how I wanted the characters to react to Harmony's statement.
Rest assured, these pages are being redrawn to fit the theme of the comic. That doesn't say I won't eliminate my derp-wolves entirely,
they will appear in less serious situations and will be featured in any upcoming "Shorts & Specials" I'll make.
Be aware I'm not changing the entire comic to fit anyone's particular taste, I'm using the review/critique as a guide to help improve
the comic and make it better. I wanted help on how it could be enhanced and the user supplied me with plenty of tips.

To conclude, there will be no further updates until I have pages 95 & 96 updated.
In the meantime I'll be  uploading pages with fixed dialogue and spelling.

Thank you for reading this.
I hope everyone has a wonderful weekend :heart:
XOXO
Wolven-Sister


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"A Story Your Parents Never Told You."

Moonlit Dawn: A Mythical Tale (c) Alethea 2009-Present
Genre: Fantasy/ Adventure/ Mythology/ Romance


.•SUMMARY•.

When there is an end to a cycle, there is a new beginning already forming. The passage of the fates are brittle, all those who inhabit our world unknowingly follow a predestined fate. However, a corrupted wolf goddess plans to rival against the fates with her army of Beastmen. Unfortunately for her, she had inadvertently caused an imbalance among the elements bringing forth new faces to rebuke her efforts.

Wolf brothers, Joker and Mischief, have been roaming since they were exiled from their pack; their goal to put the past miles behind them. Until they are halted by Harmony, a half-goddess, who declares the brothers are elemental guardians.Their quest sounded simple; use their abilities to eliminate the Beastmen and prevent the goddess from destroying fate itself.


As the journey progresses it begins to burden the brothers as they confront their shrouded past and unearth family secrets. Uncovering the core of themselves could strengthen them rendering defeat of the corrupt goddess, or it could disintegrate morale and all could fall into chaos.


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.•What is this group?•.


:bulletyellow: This is a group centered on my fantasy/adventure graphic novel Moonlit Dawn: A Mythical Tale".
Contests, pages, annoucements and exclusive artwork will be displayed here to help promote the comic.

.•Can I Submit Art?•.


:bulletgreen: As long as it is Fan Art for the comic--Absolutely!! :nod: However if you start submitting art that isn't related to the comic at all, then I will be forced to remove it from the group and warn you.

.•What kind of Fan Art can I submit?•.

:bulletred: Anything! :dance: Traditional, digital, literature, poems, creative crafts, photomanips, etc..the list can go on.

The only things I won't accept into this group:
- Hateful artwork towards comic/characters/creator.
- Artwork displaying characters in a mature manner (i.e., genetalia, porn, etc..)
- Stolen/altered/traced artwork without the original artist's permission.


.•Is this just another wolf comic?•.


:bulletorange: Well that depends on your definition of an "average wolf comic."
I have studied cliches, and the Do's & Dont's when making a comic, because I'm very serious in this project. I will try to stray away from too many cliches and have many plans to keep the reader guessing as well as keeping pages unexpected.

However, I am only human. I make mistakes and I cannot please everyone.
If you find you are not enjoying my comic, please maturely leave this page.

Except, if you feel like your tongue is going to break off because you so badly need to tell me what I did wrong with my story that displeased you, please send me a note.

.•Is there "Sparklewolves"?•.


:bulletblue: NOOO!! :nuu: I definitely have no interest whatsoever in "Sparkle-anything."

I will tell you now, everything in my story has a Rhyme and Reason. The markings on the main 3 wolves will be explained in the story as well as the odd coloring of Essence and her sister Mirna.

But if you pay attention to the details, every other animal in the comic has natural colors.


If you have any questions or concerns,
Please contact Wolven-Sister
Thank you!
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:icon15midnightwolf81:
15MidNightWolf81 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012   General Artist
WAHHHH!!! :la:
I freaking love your comic!
Thanks for the invite, my friend^^
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Cloudfrost Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!
Thanks for sending us an affiliation request!
:iconthe-drawing-pack: accepts with great pleasure!
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Karai0318 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for invite :D
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tyler9862 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the invitation
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